Pic 1

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Way to easy

Pic 2

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Was getting a bit harder but still easy

Pic 3

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this one was pretty hard, I've made mistakes for sure

Page 1: Only problem here is you didn't level the white slider enough. About 5-10 more points would suffice.

Page 2: You're supposed to redraw the white rip going through the panel

Page 3: Underleveled, the blacks need to be black and the white needs to be leveled a couple of more points. Redraws aren't bad, but could be better.

Overall you have a tendency to underlevel though that isn't as bad as overleveling. I'd like to see a couple more practice pages mainly focusing on getting the leveling and/or burning/dodging done well.

Used fireworks instead this time

Pic 1

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Edit leveling

Pic 2

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Edited the 2 pics together

Pic 3

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Leveling and some redraw/cloning (still not happy with karaage's comb)

your redraws are not bad. the only problem is the leveling.
maybe its hard because your not using PS. you can get PS for free if you want to use it.

i'm trying it with fireworks, its practically the same

The best free image editor you can use is GIMP, but we're mainly a PS group. Some use GIMP, but PS is preferred as sometimes we need to be able to edit PSD (Photoshop) files.

ok if you need photoshop just google something like "photoshop CS4 for free" or photoshop CS4 +cracked
etc.
you'll find thousands of hits
if you don't want to do that, i've heard postitive things from ras about Paint.Net
good redrawing btw

firework is the brother of photoshop (so it accepts psd files)

and in fact its more cloning than redrawing

As some random guy ill say you got guts to post an application to the public. Anyways, I got photoshop Elements 6 and it dosnt have the pen tool -_-. Then again, I suck even more on photoshop, and I can't seem to stop spamming this forum. Hindsight, eh?

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	All u have to do is delete a few vert lines of pixels and white it out. Then you use the rectangle tool and select the entire left slide and align it with the right side.

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The people who fall for this I will just laugh

Since everyone seems to be retarded and talking about what shit they use, I'm gonna be blunt.

main problem is leveling.... All of them are unleveled... blacks are not completely black, whites are not completely white

The redraws are decent, but not great. Not noticeable if you have a good typesetter, but the redraws look choppy. Looks like you cloned all the redraws. Try using vectors and the pentool to fix the choppy curves.
Especially on the bottom right redraw on the last page. the curve is soooo choppy.

on the 2nd page, the person u redraw is noticeable on the part that u redraw. darker than the rest of the pic. You need to make it less conspicuous.

Ok, i get it.

I'll post some other pics if i think it has improved.

P.S. where can i join SA

Galooza wil add you to it.