Cleaner application (Altaix)

**Altaix** · Subject: Cleaner application (Altaix) Sun Mar 08, 2009 2:17 am

Hi, this is my first time cleaning a manga.
So I hope I didn't failed to much Razz

P.S.: I live in germany , so my english isn't so good.

#1 Easy:

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#2 Med.:
I have tried to put together both pictures, but after the third one I chose a other way.

Spoiler:

#3 Hard.:

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**Colonel Site** · Subject: Re: Cleaner application (Altaix) Sun Mar 08, 2009 3:25 am

Redraws are decent for your first try, but not great...

The main problem I see is dust and leveling....

let the others do their critique... cheers

**syler** · Subject: Re: Cleaner application (Altaix) Sun Mar 08, 2009 9:27 am

i agree withe site.
not bad for a first try. all you need is a little more practice and your ready.

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**Thousand_Master** · Subject: Re: Cleaner application (Altaix) Mon Mar 09, 2009 11:37 pm

hm... the first two are great. although you still need to redraw the part that is missing in the second one. Very Happy

the third one needs some work not in the redrawing, but in the leveling department. level until the blacks are black. not more though. after that i think that it'll be good.
the first one is perfect.

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**Altaix** · Subject: Re: Cleaner application (Altaix) Mon Mar 09, 2009 11:47 pm

Thanks for the critique.
Since i need some training i want to join the SA.
SO that i can become a Member later if i get better.

**syler** · Subject: Re: Cleaner application (Altaix) Tue Mar 10, 2009 12:15 am

sweet hope you can join our team!

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**Galooza** · Subject: Re: Cleaner application (Altaix) Tue Mar 10, 2009 12:39 am

Overall: Redraws are pretty good though you didn't redraw the rip on pg 2. You have a tendency to overlevel. Just cut back a little bit or resize images to 2400 px height, do your leveling there, then resize back to 1200 px. It'll make minor overleveling look better. And then yeah, make sure you get that dust :whip:

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**Altaix** · Subject: Re: Cleaner application (Altaix) Tue Mar 10, 2009 12:42 am

Galooza wrote:

Overall: Redraws are pretty good though you didn't redraw the rip on pg 2. You have a tendency to overlevel. Just cut back a little bit or resize images to 2400 px height, do your leveling there, then resize back to 1200 px. It'll make minor overleveling look better. And then yeah, make sure you get that dust :whip:

Thank you for the tip

Excale · Subject: Re: Cleaner application (Altaix) Tue Mar 10, 2009 8:43 am

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