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Shadow
Sack Boy
Number of posts: 14
Reputation: 0
Registration date: 2009-01-26
Age: 20
 |  Subject: Cleaner application  Sun 1 Feb 2009 - 22:38 | |
| Hi, I'm still a newbie with photoshop, (the cleaning guide helped a lot), but i would like to apply to be a cleaner.with some time I was able to clean all 3 images, well kinda at least, i dont have much experience (5 images at most) so any advice or critics are welcome 1st image (easy) | Spoiler: | | | [img] [/img] |
didn't do pretty much here, just leveled it a bit, then darkened the guys pants (magic wand->level), and removed the text from the bubbles
2nd image (med)
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leveled->divided in 2->rotated and croped->darkened a vertical line on the 2nd page->then cloned a lot.Didn't know if i should have left the page numbers or not.
3nd image (hard)
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rotated->leveled->croped->darkened ikuto's hair and shirt via leveling->then tried to redraw. I had a hard time with the chicken on the last panel, so i left it like that, incase the typewritter could type on the blank spots, but i also tried cloning from the 4rd panel.
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and i'm currently using photoshop 7.0, but sometime around this week ill get cs4
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Galooza
Admin
Number of posts: 758
Reputation: 42
Registration date: 2008-10-21
Age: 23
Location: From whence the sun doth shine.
| | Subject: Re: Cleaner application Sun 1 Feb 2009 - 23:17 | |
| Nice job on the first two, can't find anything wrong. Hard on the second try, Ikuto's shirt looks kinda choppy in the 2nd to last panel and your speed lines got a little funky in the last panel, but that's it. Accepted. Welcome to the team  We'll make sure to put you in the cleaner rotation. I'm impressed, that's quite good for a beginner. _________________  |
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Thousand_Master
The 3L33T Master
Number of posts: 535
Reputation: 16
Registration date: 2008-10-02
Age: 24
Location: the edge of the middle of nowhere
| | Subject: Re: Cleaner application Mon 2 Feb 2009 - 7:55 | |
| Hmmm... i'm likin' what i'm seein' great redrawing. better than Kei if i'm not mistaken  welcome to the team! |
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Shadow
Sack Boy
Number of posts: 14
Reputation: 0
Registration date: 2009-01-26
Age: 20
| | Subject: Re: Cleaner application Mon 2 Feb 2009 - 12:37 | |
| Thanks. And ya, his shirt does look kinda weird, i guess i overleved it and didnt notice after =\ (btw is that the correct way to ink blacks?(magic wand then further level the image) |
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Galooza
Admin
Number of posts: 758
Reputation: 42
Registration date: 2008-10-21
Age: 23
Location: From whence the sun doth shine.
| | Subject: Re: Cleaner application Mon 2 Feb 2009 - 12:52 | |
| Since you selected with wand it's not too bad, but using the burn tool after the wand would be better. _________________ |
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syler
Ala Atra Scans Member
Number of posts: 1299
Reputation: 6
Registration date: 2008-10-13
Age: 20
Location: still sleeping. please dont disturb.
| | Subject: Re: Cleaner application Mon 2 Feb 2009 - 15:10 | |
| its look good i guess your boredom guage hit the maximum mark.  _________________  Behold my new sig made by Blkdrgn |
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Colonel Site
Retired Staff
Number of posts: 120
Reputation: 0
Registration date: 2008-10-25
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Galooza
Admin
Number of posts: 758
Reputation: 42
Registration date: 2008-10-21
Age: 23
Location: From whence the sun doth shine.
| | Subject: Re: Cleaner application Tue 3 Feb 2009 - 22:17 | |
| Sorry TM, but Site's right. Kei's better than I am at redrawing. _________________ |
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Keiichi
Retired Staff
Number of posts: 183
Reputation: 0
Registration date: 2008-10-19
Location: In the clubroom...alone...*sniffle*
| | Subject: Re: Cleaner application Sun 8 Feb 2009 - 19:35 | |
| Good, good, seems like a lesson in the pen tool and vectoring is needed. Btw I'm back if you guys didn't know. Just a little experience and you'll be all set to go Shadow. Btw excellent job on page 2. I mean it. P.S. after a close eye-balling I saw "some" specks of dirt on the NA pages, but that's ignorable. Also, completely blacking something isn't always the right choice, it makes the image choppy you know? E.G. the guy's pants on page 1. |
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