test 1



not much i did here just removed the text and changed the bright and contrast

test 2



moved the page halves apart to where i felt comfortable and redrew that white line in the middle removed some noise and adjusted contrast and bright settings again

test 3



removed all text redrew (chicken thing was horrible) noise reduction contrast/bright

i did not look at the others before submiting this i will to see comparison of what i should or shouldnt have done (and to see how crappy a job i did compared to others) probably not the best but meh cant say i didnt try

arright, in my early morning bleariness and crappy laptop screen i'd say that the first 2 are great. on the 3rd one, the blacks need to be black.
also, it could be my damn laptop, but the last picture looks like its been cut off.
i think thats just my comp, however.

1 Looks good
2 Looks good but you missed erasing a small text bubble. not a big deal. (The one on the far left on the guys back)
3 Like TM said I don't think you leveled it all the way to black. you didn't redraw the tigers tail. The house looks good but the speed lines would need work. and the redraw on karaage(chicken) looks pretty good but it looks like you did it with the pencil tool so it is really obvious that it was redrawn. try using the Paint brush so it blends a little better.

First two pages are well done. 3rd:

1) I would imagine you're using the pen tool, but you need to make sure paint brush is selected when stroking a line.
2) Blacks aren't fully leveled while white looks a tad overleveled.
3) Ya, North Leader's tail needs redrawing.

Main issue is making sure you're stroking with the brush selected in the box, that's all. One more thing I'll add as advice is to mix up the cloning. While text will usually cover it up, that's not always the case. Spot clone it if you have to, patternized cloning is really noticable.

hmm well thats great to hear and i kept telling myself that i should redraw the tigers tail but i got caught up in other things and thats patrially why the cloning was bad on the second to last frame also i didnt choose the right kind of black with my paint tool i never used a pen i meant to choose a slightly greyer black (if that makes sense) wow i didnt realise i did as well as i did (of all people i usually bash myself the most)

Even though I'm not a cleaner, what I've learned from being here is that practice makes perfect and this group is the place to get plenty of practice. So if your accepted by the others then I'll be glad to have you help with NA if you want.

first two page are perfectly well done...
bout three page there a few area you could totally do some practices on
well since gal ready cover all of you mistake i had nothing else add on to it.....

uuh sure ill help with whatever you want. Ill retake the last test if you guys want (ill restart) i was being rushed (had to leave to do other things and im sometimes forgetfull and didnt know when i would get back on my comp) and ill do a better job. your guys choice...(runnin out of excuses)...

nah, don't do that, just fix that page and you're in

wow thats awesome now that ive had more time it looks much better



i re leveled it and recloned the area above the chickens head and redrew the top of italso i remembered to redraw both the tigers tails also cloned the speed lines in the bottom corner and adjusted them to the vanishing point hope its good enough (not quite sure if i over-leveled it)

very nice
you're in

yay awesomeness

congratulations! welcome to the team!!