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PostSubject: Re: applying to be typesetter   Sun Feb 15, 2009 6:42 pm

okay
im working on it right now
thanks!
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PostSubject: Re: applying to be typesetter   Mon Feb 16, 2009 12:03 am

Meow-kun wrote:
3rd page:
-4th panel: Don't have !? on a different line, that makes it look like it's happening in a different phrase... or whatever, I'll let Brazen explain on what I mean.

I assume you're referring to the way manga sometimes has bubbles that are just "!?", in which case yeah, putting it on a seperate line makes it look like you didn't edit the bubble properly. Well, the general rule is that punctuation just goes with the last word anyway, since that's how we write conventionally, putting spaces after rather than before.

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PostSubject: Re: applying to be typesetter   Mon Feb 16, 2009 6:45 am

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quick question,for tonkatsu in 2nd panel,what does it say?
coz i didnt see anything in the script
can i just put "pu" for right now.
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PostSubject: Re: applying to be typesetter   Mon Feb 16, 2009 6:52 am

sweetsoursauce wrote:
p.157
quick question,for tonkatsu in 2nd panel,what does it say?
coz i didnt see anything in the script
can i just put "pu" for right now.


read the script carefully cause he said "Pu!?"

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PostSubject: Re: applying to be typesetter   Mon Feb 16, 2009 6:53 am

It says γ€Œγ·γƒΌγ€ which can be transliterated as "Puu". Do pigs actually sigh in real life? I wonder.

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PostSubject: Re: applying to be typesetter   Mon Feb 16, 2009 7:54 am

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PostSubject: Re: applying to be typesetter   Mon Feb 16, 2009 7:55 am

after reading meow-kun"brutally honest"criticsm..i fixed it a little bit..(i said a little bit coz i couldn't make it perfect Sad( )
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PostSubject: Re: applying to be typesetter   Mon Feb 16, 2009 8:40 am

ok much better

well second times the charm

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PostSubject: Re: applying to be typesetter   Mon Feb 16, 2009 8:43 am

thank you! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: applying to be typesetter   Mon Feb 16, 2009 7:00 pm

sweetsoursauce wrote:
after reading meow-kun"brutally honest"criticsm..i fixed it a little bit..(i said a little bit coz i couldn't make it perfect Sad( )


well mo one is perfect. i agree with ras it looks really good.
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PostSubject: Re: applying to be typesetter   Tue Feb 17, 2009 12:08 am

you're right,i didnt notice that
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