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PostSubject: It's about time i became a full editor...   Tue Sep 22, 2009 3:28 pm

I'm back at college and have hours of free time so i figure why not start scanlating again. here's my Typesetters app i'll post the others once i am done with them... (note i used a few of my own fonts here and there, and reworded a few things, if you want me to go strictly by the book i'll fix it.

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Edit: tried to center the text a little better.

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PostSubject: Re: It's about time i became a full editor...   Tue Sep 22, 2009 5:00 pm

Well, here is my humble opinion as a nearly newbie here:

It looks good overall, except for ayane's bubble in the middle left, where the font size you used was too big and the text isn't complete...
I personally don't put periods in my scans, because there aren't many mangas i have seen that do that (in japanese, they dont put them), but it's ok.

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PostSubject: Re: It's about time i became a full editor...   Tue Sep 22, 2009 5:25 pm

oops ya i missed that some how, fixed it... i just kept punctuation because it was in the script

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PostSubject: Re: It's about time i became a full editor...   Mon Sep 28, 2009 4:23 pm

ok here's the second page
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PostSubject: Re: It's about time i became a full editor...   Wed Sep 30, 2009 3:45 pm

Overall Nice. In my little opinion of course. I can't see any direct flaws withh it at all.
So you're in the team now right Smile
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PostSubject: Re: It's about time i became a full editor...   Wed Sep 30, 2009 5:24 pm

ive been in the team for almost a year T_T. I was a cleaner and i PRed ch 37. i'm just becoming a TS as well i just need Ras's ok

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PostSubject: Re: It's about time i became a full editor...   Wed Sep 30, 2009 7:36 pm

Vamp first page needs work centering is off in some bubbles, your second pg was overall better then the first.
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PostSubject: Re: It's about time i became a full editor...   Wed Sep 30, 2009 8:31 pm

ya i can see what you mean (especially on the first one that was bad), i spent 5 min making it a little better.
the other thing i noticed my text was bigger than yours, should i make it smaller in the future?

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PostSubject: Re: It's about time i became a full editor...   Mon Oct 12, 2009 4:31 pm

ok i did page 105 from vol 11 and it was missing so i decided to add this to my aplicaton
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