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Loki-Thor Ala Atra Scans Member


Number of posts: 104 Reputation: 3 Registration date: 2009-08-01 Age: 17 Location: Luring kena with a huge onigiri :3
 | Subject: My application Sat Aug 08, 2009 11:06 pm | |
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ras_tel Madskil Admin


Number of posts: 1140 Reputation: 28 Registration date: 2008-10-04 Age: 20 Location: here, there, everywhere
 | Subject: Re: My application Sun Aug 09, 2009 3:35 am | |
| I say looks good but the only problem i see is with text separation on the second pg everything else is good so far. _________________  |
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Loki-Thor Ala Atra Scans Member


Number of posts: 104 Reputation: 3 Registration date: 2009-08-01 Age: 17 Location: Luring kena with a huge onigiri :3
 | Subject: Re: My application Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:41 am | |
| that was because i thought it looked better with 2 "intros"... but that's all |
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Magister Magi 13 Ala Atra Scans Member


Number of posts: 215 Reputation: 3 Registration date: 2008-10-26 Age: 17 Location: God Knows . . . since I've Lost My Music . . .
 | Subject: Re: My application Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:51 pm | |
| I don't think you need to do that, you'll be better off combining them as one text since the speech bubbles are too small to have texts separation; makes it more appealing to the eyes . . . I think? . . . It's only my opinion anyway so I'll leave the real comment to ras (he is the boss of us TS after all) . . . PS: I didn't know you're a fan of Nekane! Not that I hate her, I just don't know she has a fan.  |
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Loki-Thor Ala Atra Scans Member


Number of posts: 104 Reputation: 3 Registration date: 2009-08-01 Age: 17 Location: Luring kena with a huge onigiri :3
 | Subject: Re: My application Mon Aug 10, 2009 7:38 pm | |
| all right, here is v2.0 of the second page | Spoiler: | | |  |
_________________  I'd like to wake up like that for once in my life... |
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ras_tel Madskil Admin


Number of posts: 1140 Reputation: 28 Registration date: 2008-10-04 Age: 20 Location: here, there, everywhere
 | Subject: Re: My application Sat Aug 15, 2009 1:57 pm | |
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Loki-Thor Ala Atra Scans Member


Number of posts: 104 Reputation: 3 Registration date: 2009-08-01 Age: 17 Location: Luring kena with a huge onigiri :3
 | Subject: Re: My application Sat Aug 15, 2009 6:45 pm | |
| aaah, so you meant in the lower right frame too! i think i don't understand very well the script... i'll try once again _________________  I'd like to wake up like that for once in my life... |
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Loki-Thor Ala Atra Scans Member


Number of posts: 104 Reputation: 3 Registration date: 2009-08-01 Age: 17 Location: Luring kena with a huge onigiri :3
 | Subject: Re: My application Thu Aug 27, 2009 10:26 pm | |
| 1st - sorry for the double post  2nd - i've come back from the beach, and i had no photoshop there  so i've only been able to do this now 3rd - here are 2 more versions of that page i love so much (irony) more separations  one more  my problems here are: i don't think that it's necessary to separate the text and use every bubble. There are some places where it makes the page more "appealing", but in some other places (like in suzu's bottom right bubble in the example ras gave earlier) i think it's not necessary. The other problem is... i can't manage to fit those two text cases in the bottom right part... well, I'm crossing my fingers for this to work. _________________  I'd like to wake up like that for once in my life... |
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thevampirate Ala Atra Scans Member


Number of posts: 346 Reputation: 0 Registration date: 2008-10-28 Age: 18
 | Subject: Re: My application Fri Aug 28, 2009 5:10 am | |
| your'e improving but when you are applying just kiss ras's ass and do everything the way he wants it. after you become a full typesetter you can make judgment calls on how to do the text. i noticed one small misspelling: you put 'TL Not' instead of 'TL Note' _________________  |
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ras_tel Madskil Admin


Number of posts: 1140 Reputation: 28 Registration date: 2008-10-04 Age: 20 Location: here, there, everywhere
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Loki-Thor Ala Atra Scans Member


Number of posts: 104 Reputation: 3 Registration date: 2009-08-01 Age: 17 Location: Luring kena with a huge onigiri :3
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syler Ala Atra Scans Member


Number of posts: 1299 Reputation: 6 Registration date: 2008-10-13 Age: 20 Location: still sleeping. please dont disturb.
 | Subject: Re: My application Sun Aug 30, 2009 8:48 pm | |
| lol. i hope you pass it now. you have been through a lot.  _________________  Behold my new sig made by Blkdrgn |
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Loki-Thor Ala Atra Scans Member


Number of posts: 104 Reputation: 3 Registration date: 2009-08-01 Age: 17 Location: Luring kena with a huge onigiri :3
 | Subject: Re: My application Sun Aug 30, 2009 9:56 pm | |
| i know  but it's true that i had to learn one or two things... pweeease  _________________  I'd like to wake up like that for once in my life... |
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ras_tel Madskil Admin


Number of posts: 1140 Reputation: 28 Registration date: 2008-10-04 Age: 20 Location: here, there, everywhere
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blazingdead Ala Atra Scans Member


Number of posts: 308 Reputation: 4 Registration date: 2009-08-14 Age: 17 Location: From whence the acid doth rain.
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CrimsonMagician Ala Atra Scans Member


Number of posts: 17 Reputation: 1 Registration date: 2009-08-21 Location: Sweden
 | Subject: Re: My application Mon Aug 31, 2009 3:45 am | |
| Congratulations on your approval^^ |
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Loki-Thor Ala Atra Scans Member


Number of posts: 104 Reputation: 3 Registration date: 2009-08-01 Age: 17 Location: Luring kena with a huge onigiri :3
 | Subject: Re: My application Mon Aug 31, 2009 4:42 am | |
| wiii ^^ thanks!!  _________________  I'd like to wake up like that for once in my life... |
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syler Ala Atra Scans Member


Number of posts: 1299 Reputation: 6 Registration date: 2008-10-13 Age: 20 Location: still sleeping. please dont disturb.
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