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Loki-Thor
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PostSubject: My application   Sat Aug 08, 2009 11:06 pm

FINALLY!! Razz

After 2 crashes on photoshop (now I've learnt to save a lot of times the same scan...), I'm able to submit my application.

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Annnd yes! I suck as a cleaner Razz XD

What do you think?

PD: I ♥ Nekane X3
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PostSubject: Re: My application   Sun Aug 09, 2009 3:35 am

I say looks good but the only problem i see is with text separation on the second pg everything else is good so far.

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PostSubject: Re: My application   Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:41 am

that was because i thought it looked better with 2 "intros"... but that's all
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PostSubject: Re: My application   Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:51 pm

I don't think you need to do that, you'll be better off combining them as one text since the speech bubbles are too small to have texts separation; makes it more appealing to the eyes . . . I think?

. . . It's only my opinion anyway so I'll leave the real comment to ras (he is the boss of us TS after all) . . .

PS: I didn't know you're a fan of Nekane! Not that I hate her, I just don't know she has a fan. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: My application   Mon Aug 10, 2009 7:38 pm

all right, here is v2.0 of the second page

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PostSubject: Re: My application   Sat Aug 15, 2009 1:57 pm

Loki-Thor wrote:
all right, here is v2.0 of the second page

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again looks good but still the text separation problem.

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see what i mean the text is split nicely with in the bubbles

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PostSubject: Re: My application   Sat Aug 15, 2009 6:45 pm

aaah, so you meant in the lower right frame too!

i think i don't understand very well the script... i'll try once again

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PostSubject: Re: My application   Thu Aug 27, 2009 10:26 pm

1st - sorry for the double post Razz
2nd - i've come back from the beach, and i had no photoshop there Razz so i've only been able to do this now
3rd - here are 2 more versions of that page i love so much (irony)

more separations

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my problems here are:

i don't think that it's necessary to separate the text and use every bubble. There are some places where it makes the page more "appealing", but in some other places (like in suzu's bottom right bubble in the example ras gave earlier) i think it's not necessary.

The other problem is... i can't manage to fit those two text cases in the bottom right part...

well, I'm crossing my fingers for this to work.

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PostSubject: Re: My application   Fri Aug 28, 2009 5:10 am

your'e improving but when you are applying just kiss ras's ass and do everything the way he wants it. after you become a full typesetter you can make judgment calls on how to do the text. i noticed one small misspelling: you put 'TL Not' instead of 'TL Note'

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PostSubject: Re: My application   Sat Aug 29, 2009 9:53 am

ok loki everything looks good expect for the bottom left panel split the words evenly their.

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PostSubject: Re: My application   Sun Aug 30, 2009 6:15 pm

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Annnd another one...

the text is separated, i've rotated the text out of the bubble (i finally know how it's done!!!), and the mispelling is no more there...

admin-sama, what do you think of this humble version?

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PostSubject: Re: My application   Sun Aug 30, 2009 8:48 pm

lol. i hope you pass it now. you have been through a lot. lol!

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PostSubject: Re: My application   Sun Aug 30, 2009 9:56 pm

i know but it's true that i had to learn one or two things...

pweeease

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PostSubject: Re: My application   Mon Aug 31, 2009 2:29 am

pass welcome to the team

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PostSubject: Re: My application   Mon Aug 31, 2009 3:09 am

Good job and welcome to the team

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PostSubject: Re: My application   Mon Aug 31, 2009 3:45 am

Congratulations on your approval^^
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PostSubject: Re: My application   Mon Aug 31, 2009 4:42 am

wiii ^^ thanks!!

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PostSubject: Re: My application   Mon Aug 31, 2009 8:22 pm

congrats loki!! comradef_w00t

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